SDY
You started a little too clinical, but I haven't really found anything to disagree with

And set off (the frequently arrested activist named) Kurtis's dismissive mode

spoiled brat is a little strong

Jessica Amber Murray
i agree, and it was meant that way. i think emotional breakdown is probably more accurate.

SDY
(the frequently arrested activist named) Kurtis can't handle dsenting opinions

Jessica Amber Murray
clearly :)

SDY
this group won't accomplish anything

they will drink and hate cops

Jessica Amber Murray
i was really hoping to get through to some of the quieter members. but i actually respect (the frequently arrested activist named) Kurtis' organizing abilities and wasn't directing anything i said at him at all. i'm not particularly happy about the way that turned out.

SDY
nothing good was ever going to come of it, even though it was needed